Baby Clothing Industry

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Can anybody check if I have comma erors in any phrase and dependent clause fragments?

1)Even thought, there must be millions of pigeons in the city. You never see a baby pigeon. It makes you wonder, where they’re hiding.
2)Children between the ages of eight and twelve,ofthen follow teenagers’ trends. And look up to teens as role models. Mimicking their behavior in frequently disconcerting ways.
3)The least expensive remote control- toy car, costs over fifty dollars. Which is more than many budget- conscious parents want to pay. Such high costs, are typical in the toy industry.
4)The student’s dorm room looked like a disaster area. Heaps of dirty clothes, crumpled papers, and halfeaten snacks were strewn everywhere. Keeping the room neat was obviously not a priority.
5)Because they feel urban,schools are second- rate. many parents, hope to move their families to the suburbs. Even thought, they plan to continue working in the city.
6)Pulling the too-short hospital gown, around his wasted body, the patient wandered down the hospital corridor.

1)Even though there must be millions of pigeons in the city, you never see a baby pigeon. It makes you wonder where they’re hiding.
2)Children between the ages of eight and twelve often follow teenagers’ trends and look up to teens as role models, mimicking their behavior in frequently disconcerting ways.
3)The least expensive remote control- toy car costs over fifty dollars, which is more than many budget- conscious parents want to pay. Such high costs are typical in the toy industry.
4)The student’s dorm room looked like a disaster area. Heaps of dirty clothes, crumpled papers, and half-eaten snacks were strewn everywhere. Keeping the room neat was obviously not a priority.
5)Because they feel urban schools are second- rate, many parents hope to move their families to the suburbs, even though they plan to continue working in the city.
6)Pulling the too-short hospital gown around his wasted body, the patient wandered down the hospital corridor.

You also had a few spelling errors that I went ahead and corrected.